This example tells a story of a girl who has worked through tragedy by becoming a contortionist. It overlays natural sound, interview voice-overs and music well, and there are a variety of interesting visuals (interviews, demonstrations, multiple-angles and still photos).
This example, also from the Oregonian, really doesn't tell a story. It doesn't necessarily need voice-overs, but there is not enough information given in the natural sound to completely understand what is going on.
Furthermore, most of the video is actually just footage from a go-pro (or a camera like it) of a first-person view of snowboarding. This time should be cut down to a couple of seconds. The snow is so plain, and people get bored quickly. If they were to instead replace it with more videos of others snowboarding from different angles, it could be more visually interesting.
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